Alison Garwood Jones

Can AI Mark School Assignments?

May 15, 2023

The short answer is yes. I tried. First, it’s tempting to outsource marking given that most sessional instructors don’t get paid to grade assignments. Depending on class sizes, you can be marking for an entire week free of charge.

Will your students notice if they’re getting a gold star or a knitted brow from a robot? It depends on your teaching style. If you present as beige and technical in class, the AI’s feedback on their assignments will align with your general vibe. But suppose you like to regale students in class with personal anecdotes from the field and fresh news items and case studies that illustrate the learning objectives? In that case, you’ll have to figure out a way to punch up the AI’s assignment feedback so your students see you in the exchange — assuming that you care about being H:H (human to human). That niggly process of fixing paragraphs can be time-consuming.

Drawing of Swirls by Alison Garwood-JonesProcreate Illustration by Alison Garwood-Jones

Next, to ensure the AI understands how to mark each assignment so it offers the most useful feedback, you need to craft a prompt that clearly denotes what is being evaluated. That may take several rewrites. Then you need to drop in the text from each student’s submission behind your prompt without missing any paragraphs during that grab and paste from the school’s learning management system.

Highlighting and grabbing text from uploaded PDFs, especially ones that include images, can be hit and miss. You may find yourself scrolling and scrolling to make sure all of the student’s assignment has been captured as you toggle between two browser windows (the assignment submission window and ChatGPT screen). That too is time-consuming.

Alternatively, you could download each assignment to see if that makes the cut-and-paste more seamless (tip: make sure you have enough disk space on your computer). But that’s adding friction, not subtracting.  Either way, be prepared for eye strain and dizzy spells if you work on a laptop.

Oh … sometimes ChatGPT goes on sabbatical without notice and you have to wait for it to come back adding to the time you spend marking.

Conclusion: Reading student assignments and crafting the feedback myself turns out to be faster and easier and it feels more caring. Plus, I’m the kind of instructor who likes to give students my observations about their progress throughout the term. Just thinking about what it would take to feed the AI all of their course assignments so it could do the same high-level dot connecting sounds like a logistical headache and quite the opposite of AI’s promise of saving time through improved efficiency.

For now, using AI to grade assignments is not a slam dunk, but I’ll continue to monitor its potential and report back any changes.

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Summer School

May 2, 2023

As a freelance writer and illustrator, it’s my job to stay on top of the latest tools to create, market and distribute my writing, illustrations, videos and audio content.

If this is relevant to your job too, join me in class this summer for Digital Communications Strategy & Social Media (also available in Micro courses) and/or Writing Digital Content at the University of Toronto SCS.

Hot topics will include:

• What’s next for marketers as we move out of the Age of Social Media and into the Age of AI?
• How to use AI as a personal assistant & creativity enhancer, even when it scares you.
• How to reach and win over your audience now that they can choose between chatbot answers and search engine results.

To learn more, go to learn.utoronto.ca

Tip:

The School recommends registering by Friday, May 12.

From May 16-18: The website will be undergoing maintenance and will not be accessible for course registrations.

If you miss that time frame, not problem! Email me at alison.garwoodjones@gmail.com and I’ll figure out a way to get you in through a window.

Alison

 

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Kurt Vonnegut on AI

May 2, 2023

What would Kurt Vonnegut say about AI? by Alison Garwood-Jones

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To Scrape or Not To Scrape

April 20, 2023

We stand on the shoulders of giants every time we unveil a breakthrough invention. That’s well established. From Newton to NASA, etc. etc.

But when you dig into this concept, sometimes you need to turn down the volume on the triumphant orchestral soundtrack.

Facebook and Twitter stood on the shoulders of legacy media in the 2010s. They stockpiled all the ad revenue which led to the crumbling of trust and revenue for fact-checked media.

When pushed, Facebook’s response to profit sharing was, and continues to be, “No More News” 

A new Washington Post investigation goes under the hood of generative AI’s LLMs and shows, once again, this latest tech advance relies heavily on The New York Times, The LA Times and The Guardian (all subscription businesses) for its firepower. Wikipedia is at the top of the Scaping List, but that’s a separate story. Canadians, the Toronto Star is number 98 on the list of Top 100 scraped sites.

There’s something deja-vooey about all of this. Will good working partnerships with tech continue to elude us? Heck, we haven’t even found a fair business model for content creators and social media companies, and we’re already moving out of that era.

I hope the coffee is extra strong in legislatures around the world. As citizens, let’s stay committed to trying to understand what’s at stake for everyone, even as we integrate these tools into our workflows and lives.

In the meantime, the danceathon between permission and forgiveness raves on.

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The Future of Google Juice

April 4, 2023

Google Juice Drawing by Alison Garwood-Jones

The answer is: no one knows.

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The Right Purse

April 4, 2023

I buy a new purse about once or twice a decade. Yesterday I bought two (TWO!) in the span of an hour. No more spending until 2033.

You see, I moved into my brick-and-beam condo without checking the closet space. A walk-in is for other people. I have a shoulder-in closet and a ton of stuff rammed under my bed.

I signed on the dotted line for my condo because I open the front door to the sight of two (TWO!) six-and-a-half-foot tall windows that offer a “big sky” view of Toronto’s west end and, at sunrise, the distant gleaming skyscrapers of Mississauga, which I’ve taken to calling Hoboken from my perch (snooty, I know).

In the past few weeks, I’ve been running to these windows every time I hear the oncoming honks of a trio of Canadian geese, back from wherever because it’s spring here in Toronto. As they fly past and head towards Lake Ontario, I get a very intimate view of their fat, fuzzy bellies, blinking eyes, and poo drops ( like B-17 bombing raids over Europe during WWII). The theatre through these windows never disappoints.

But let’s get back to the purses, which I have taken to displaying on my bookshelves because of the closet problem. The first two are a pair of beauties I purchased yesterday at Toronto’s annual Vintage Show at the historical Canadian Exhibition grounds. The colourful one is a hard shell with a snap clasp covered in a swirly silk scarf pattern that dates back to about 1962. I’m sure its previous owner paired it with white cat’s-eye sunglasses, a crinoline dress or pencil skirt with a matching sweater, and kitten heels.

My new purse from the Toronto Vintage Show

Yay baby!My new purse from the Toronto Vintage Show
Turn to the right.

The second is a black evening clutch with the perfect gold bow clasp. It was made in Montreal by Paramount bags.My new purse from the Toronto Vintage Show

I mean, look at it!

My God, its elegance is off the charts. And look! Inside there’s a gold satin change purse for those shiny pennies that the Canadian mint stopped making years ago. Back then, a few quarters went a long way. Beyond the change purse, there would have been a powder puff and a Kleenex square, and maybe a breath mint. I will fill this envelope with my iPhone, a credit card, the Kleenex square, and that universal tube of red lipstick that has been empowering us girls since forever.My new purse from the Toronto Vintage Show

What’s in your purse?

The third purse was purchased from the same show about 15 years ago. Note: As my hair gets threaded with more silver, I’ve kept my cougar accessories to a minimum. But this was a rare instance where I said, “Take my money!” Now hear me roar!My new purse from the Toronto Vintage Show

I had to bang this purse back into shape after I sat on it.

The swirly purse enjoyed date night last night. She sat on the bar top next to a glass of Barolo. As a final touch, I’m going to take her to my favourite cobbler and ask him to add feet to her flat base. I want her to rise above the messiness of life.

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Cats and AI

March 29, 2023

Cats and AI
Will there be anything interesting left for us to do?

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Henry Pellatt’s Strength

March 27, 2023

Yesterday I climbed the staircase that takes you up and over the steep, ancient shore cliff of Lake Iroquois with my eye set on reaching the turreted mansion on the summit.

I’ve lived in Toronto since 2000. But, for whatever reason, I had yet to check out Casa Loma, built in 1911. Maybe its vibe was too Medieval Times for my taste. Or maybe my preference for post-WWI history was stopping me. I now suspect I had to get through all five seasons Downton Abbey — which only happened last year — to open my mind to this showpiece from Toronto’s fluttering red, white and blue Empire-worshipping past.

Casa Loma gardens -photo by Trip AdvisorPhoto: Trip Advisor

Henry Pellatt, its owner with his wife Mary, had the energy of Teddy Roosevelt, the wardrobe of Edward the VII (who knighted him in 1905), and the entrepreneurial thrust of Andrew Carnegie.

Henry Pellatt's bedroom decor.Henry Pellatt’s bedroom decor. Photo by Alison Garwood-Jones

How did Pellatt amass his fortune? “Sir Henry harnessed the power of Niagara Falls to electrify the streets of Toronto.” This appeared on the historical plaque at the bottom of the stairs. Good writing always makes me want to get up and move. And with that one sentence — and not my hours at the gym — I was inside the castle faster than I thought possible.

I spent most of my time in the library because that’s what I do when I’m visiting someone’s home (bathroom tours are also top of my list). Of the thousands of books still housed inside the glass cases of Pellatt’s chandeliered library, I happened upon the autobiography of Andrew Carnegie first …. followed several books over by Emmet’s Principles and Practice of Gynecology. As I write this, with only the fumes of my good instincts to lean on, I suspect that this tome was added to the shelf by Mary. By all accounts, Pellatt was a faithful husband and a kind and fair employer to the scullery maids and butlers in his charge, even with all that money. And he liked strong women.

Bookshelves at Casa Loma - photo Alison Garwood-JonesCasa Loma library shelves. By Alison Garwood-Jones
Library books at Casa Loma by Alison Garwood-JonesCasa Loma library shelves. By Alison Garwood-Jones

Mary was a tea-pouring, live-out-loud champion of women’s rights. She brought the Girl Guide movement to Canada, which empowered young girls to surpass the lady-like limitations placed on them and, instead, go for their fire, electrician, first-aid, and aeronautics badges. Meaning, she too electrified the city. With her ideas.

Casa Loma Girl Guide DisplayThe Girl Guide display on the 2nd floor. By Alison Garwood-Jones

The thrill was short-lived. The Pellatts only lived in the castle for 8 party-throwing years. In a cascading series of events — including bad land deals, a bank collapse, rising property taxes, and Mary’s death — Henry, the Edwardian industrialist, lost everything and was forced out of his castle.

He bounced around for another 20 years, living in a series of progressively smaller residences. In his final years, Pellatt moved into the depression-era clapboard bungalow of Thomas Ridgway, his former chauffeur.

Thomas Ridgway's bungalow in Mimaco. From The Pellatt newsreel: The Man Who Built Casa Loma

Sir Henry moved into Thomas Ridgway’s bungalow in Mimaco. Ridway was his former chauffeur. Photo: from the documentary, The Pellatt Newsreel: The man who built Casa Loma

At his apex, Pellatt’s business ventures amounted to 25% of the Canadian economy. He managed it all from a desk he had copied from Napoleon.

Sir Henry Pellatt mannequin by Walt WizardA lifelike model of Sir Henry on the third floor. A creation of Walt Wizard. Photo by Alison Garwood-Jones

I got the full story of his fall from a documentary looping in the basement of the castle. A small movie theatre has been set up at the bottom of a concrete swimming pool that was still in construction when Pellatt was forced to move out. It was like sitting inside a tomb.

But, like Teddy Roosevelt, Pellatt was somehow able to look past all he had lost and focus on all he had experienced — the love of Mary and the steady friendship of people like Ridgway, and meeting the King. When the Kiwanis Club of Toronto opened Casa Loma to the public in 1937, Pellatt stood in the sunshine at the podium of the ceremony and, without an ounce of self-pity, welcomed the good people of his city into his former home. I can only imagine the strength that took.

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Ian Falconer, Olivia’s Dad

March 24, 2023

My insides dropped a thousand feet when I heard that Ian Falconer, the set designer and father of Olivia the pig, died on March 7. He was only 63.

Falconer created Olivia in his tiny West Village studio apartment back in the late 1990s. It was a tribute to his new niece with the little pug nose and the determined spirit.

A few years later, when a jittery Falconer presented his drawings to a children’s literary agent on Madison Avenue, she nodded and said, “I like them … but she’s not Eloise. She’s not Eloise” (twice in case he didn’t hear her the first time).

The agent proposed that Falconer turn his drawings over to a professional author who would pen a new story. Falconer was dismayed. He thanked her and left. By now, his nervous energy was off the charts. All I knew was that I couldn’t bear to give Olivia up, he said.

If any of you would like to hear a wonderful interview with Falconer, I consider this the definitive sit down: His May 8, 2014 conversation with Jessica Harris on NPR’s “From Scratch.”

Harris, without asking what Ian’s inspirations were (Worst. Question. Ever), managed to pull from him a full bouquet of inspirations. For example, I learned that he drew Olivia in charcoal (I’m not a fan of charcoal, but now I’m not so sure … I mean, look how sensitive it is!!). Then he smudged the charcoal with women’s makeup sponges and cotton swabs. In a final splash, he dressed Olivia in red gouache dresses and maillots, with the occasional fisherman’s stripe for some extra zing. He layered shadows on top of the gouache using more smudged charcoal. To protect his creation, he locked the lines in place with hair spray.

Tribute to Ian Falconer's Olivia

Ian has inspired me to try something different than my usual Uniball pen and watercolour. It turns out, I have all the art and beauty supplies on hand, right down to the eyeliner sponges. I never use these on my face. I’d rather smudge up a pig!

We’ll always remember you, Ian!

Love,

Alison

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Spot Drawing Love

March 20, 2023

Nothing makes me happier than a good little spot drawing.

Spot drawing by Alison Garwood-Jones

Spot drawing by Alison Garwood-Jones\Spot drawing by Alison Garwood-JonesSpot drawing by Alison Garwood-Jones

Spot drawing by Alison Garwood-Jones

 

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